Beautful Angelic Goth

To suffer is To feel what You have no wish to feel To want to sink forever Into a dark oblivion... To die slowly, Painfully Knowing no one cares Knowing ...

I'm sorry if you find my writing repulsive. It just would have been nice if you could have found a less elementary way of getting your point across.

I was dragged away with many others to be Tortured Murdered Exterminated Still they deny it happened. I can still remeber being packed up with others like an animal in ...

This was a good chapter. it flowed along nicely and i was able to understand it clearly. i didn't find any grammer or spelling mistakes. :D I hope Nicholas doesn't ...

I really enjoyed reading this. i was really able to visualize the setting and the characters because of your great discriptions. The idea of having two different endings was interesting ...

Sapphire: Neglected Beauty Kellan: Warrior Princess Cassandra Campbell removed her pale blue robe and stepped into the warm water of her alabaster bathtub. She sighed as the warm water swirled ...

This is a good story. it has great discriptions and is very easy to follow. Keep up the great work :-D. i loke how u kept the reader hanging. please ...